Monday 26 January 2015

WILD & FREE ... a cinquain

This is my first attempt at writing a Cinquain - which is basically just another poetry form that follows a prescribed format.  Cinquains are 5 lines long with 2 syllables in the first line, 4 in the 2nd line, 6 in the 3rd line , 8 in the 4th line and 2 in the last line.

Sound easy doesn't it - well like Haiku, they actually have a degree of difficulty.  They can rhyme or not. 


 WILD AND FREE ….A CINQUAIN …
              Maureen Clifford © The Scribbly Bark Poet


Brumbies
running wild hear
the choppers coming near.
Head for the treeline – dodge the blast
of bullets.

One mare
big bellied, slow,
gut shot, now writhes below
in red dirt – stained a deeper hue
with blood.

She cries
her calls unheard
but one bird spreads the word.
In a gum tree, Kookaburra
mourns her.

Old Sol
retreats at last
the mare’s agony passed
she died, along with unborn foal.
So cruel.

Their goal
the ones who rule -
to remove feral pest
These horses gave to us their best
in war.

But now
we’ve changed.  It seems
they’ve no place in our dreams
expendable and out of place.
Disgrace


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